I walked down a lane;
a lonely soul in pain.
you appeared at a distance
totally wet in the rain.
I stood and watched your cheerful smile
soaking in the rain for quite a while,
you asked me to join in as we danced in the rain
for a moment i found even i had a smile..
Now we turned friends so fast
i always wished that it would last
as the world around you went afar
i stayed with you as the time passed.
It was then, i realised my love for you
even you saw it in my eyes too
i accepted the fact you never loved me
but always stayed a close friend to you.
And now it is in your eyes i see
no place for a friend in your heart for me
i see a new world build around u
and you have almost forgotten me.
I cried and cried for days forlorn
you used me when your world was gone
i know you never really meant it this way
but still i feel my heart is torn.
And its raining again today
trying to wash my tears away
whatever you did to me i can't forgive
but i will always love you just the same way...
2 comments:
WOW I CAN REALLY REALTE TO IT...
THE RHYMING IS 99.9999999% PERFECT...!
KEEP IT UP....
nice concepts, but too love sick!!! Pain is expressed in poetry when it moves from the personal to the universal.... even if u are expressing your personal pain there is no universal appeal... "of what use is this pain to me, when my heart in the market-place you have auctioned/ of what use is your love to me, when all it does, is give me pain." Carry on RM, good openings!
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